By Your Side

By Your Side

Published in picture  format because I don’t know how to keep the formatting of the poem using wordpress’s text editor.

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2 thoughts on “By Your Side

  1. Got the feeling into this just fine… each of those last nine words were like thoughts with worlds within worlds spinning them… kept thinking of those Buddhist prayer wheels that people put messages into and spin. Your poem reminded me of a prayer wheel flinging thought out and away… waiting for that forgiveness to return.

    • That is such a unique perspective on this poem. I hadn’t thought of the last nine words in that way before! Thank you for helping me see my work in a different light. Peace. 🙂

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