By Your Side Posted on 2014-08-04 by sundryfolly Published in picture format because I don’t know how to keep the formatting of the poem using wordpress’s text editor. Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
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Got the feeling into this just fine… each of those last nine words were like thoughts with worlds within worlds spinning them… kept thinking of those Buddhist prayer wheels that people put messages into and spin. Your poem reminded me of a prayer wheel flinging thought out and away… waiting for that forgiveness to return.
That is such a unique perspective on this poem. I hadn’t thought of the last nine words in that way before! Thank you for helping me see my work in a different light. Peace. 🙂