Fingers fashion fictive forms
with a mirror wrapped in rust.
After salty sable storms
her lovely face collects fine dust.
With a mirror wrapped in rust,
she spies an arresting reddish road.
Her lovely face collects fine dust;
Her heavy heart is bleakly bowed.
She spies an arresting reddish road;
Such a mighty majestic knight!
Her heavy heart is bleakly bowed.
in a fearful feverish fright.
Such a mighty majestic knight,
after salty sable storms!
In a fearful feverish fright,
fingers fashion fictive forms.
sundry folly 
Very interesting use of repetition here. The colors you mentioned started to feel like a texture. ❤
Thanks! I like using the pantoum form when I need a little structure to guide my ideas.
I enjoyed how your poem read like a story, it reminds me of the style of writing I aspire to write. I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award – Congratulations!
http://friendlyairwaves.wordpress.com/2014/09/04/liebster-award-nomination/
Thank you very much, however I don’t participate in chain blog awards. Thanks for stopping by – I will return the favor! 🙂
Haha alright then!