::now I lay me down::

at the cinema, it sounds like
a whip striking taut
leather

flying through the air
regally with pompous
grandiosity

exquisite and clean

the workmanship of a master

in this house, it sounds like
a ferocious closed fist
belting brittle bone

flying through the air
rashly with thoughtless
execution

horrifying and coarse

the workmanship of a savage

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